On top of the world,
Where we have no place,
Through laughter and fun, and
Onward to what lies ahead.
Leaning towards me, you
Are everything I have learned to fear.
Under it all you soar,
Going for my entirely shattered
Heart, before fixing it yet again.
This is gorgeous! I picture it being the story of a young adult, about to step into the world, looking back and thanking his family/parents.
ReplyDeleteThat is definitely one logical interpretation :)
Delete<3 <3 <3 The hidden phrase is hard to pick out, but the way you split at "Heart" gives it away. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteEh, glad you found the message, but the split at "Heart" would've happened if there was a message or not lol. It evens out the lines
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